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Lavinia Thompson's avatar

Oh, oh no. This is no good. Her father, I mean. The moment on the cliff between our budding lovebirds was adorable, but not long to last, I see. I am intrigued to see if it is, indeed her father, or someone wearing his ring. Onwards!

Mark Goode's avatar

OMG! Even better than the last chapter! And that’s a high bar.

This piece of writing is marvelous: “The rocks and sediment cleaved and crashed in a twisted orchestra under my shoes.”

A twisted orchestra. What a wonderful turn of phrase!

And the finalé: is it her father or just his ring? If it is her father, what now?

Repeat after me: Ann, Queen of Cliffhangers 👑

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