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Pablo Báez's avatar

She’s got sass ✨

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😊Thanks for reading!

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𝐂𝐁 𝐌𝐚𝐬𝐨𝐧's avatar

So. Good. Ready for more!!!

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That's sooo good to hear! ❤️

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Great beginning! This scene gives a good idea of your protagonist's character. Looking forward to more!

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😊❤️

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Fun start! Some interesting story questions!!

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So glad you're on board for this one! The fantasy is a slow burn but getting to it is alot of fun. 😎

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Matthew Hurst's avatar

Got me hooked….

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Oooh… you just made my day!!!!

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Jean McKinney's avatar

This is great! I love those genre mashups like fantasy and crime or espionage - gives some new life to both. Looking forward to reading more.

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Thank you, Jean! The dark magic part is a slow burn, but worth the wait. :) It was fun to have the magic element bleed its way into the natural world of the FBI. I'm glad you enjoy the mashup.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Ooo nice start! I like it!

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Thanks, Kummer!

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