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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Argh, these need to be longer! I guess nobody likes being told they’re wrong??

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Parker McCoy's avatar

Very intense. I like the energy here. Kinley is making her mark. Perhaps they can use her skills and catch the Omega Killer before he claims another victim. Great story.

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Thanks for reading, Parker! It's great to get your feedback. Hope you like how the story develops. It's gonna take a turn!

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Always one step forward, two back for Kinley.

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

So true. 😏 Thanks for reading!

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