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OMG! Even better than the last chapter! And that’s a high bar.

This piece of writing is marvelous: “The rocks and sediment cleaved and crashed in a twisted orchestra under my shoes.”

A twisted orchestra. What a wonderful turn of phrase!

And the finalé: is it her father or just his ring? If it is her father, what now?

Repeat after me: Ann, Queen of Cliffhangers 👑

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😊You make my little heart swell! Thanks, Mark!!! It means everything that you're enjoying the ride😉

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Really strong episode this week, Ann. I loved the portrayal of shock and grief in the end. Can’t wait for next week!

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🥰 Thank you! A nice twist is waiting in the wings!

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