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That... is one of the MOST clever things I've read. Your highlight idea 💡. Never seen that before, at least in fiction.

I've done that in business or blog articles, but it works so well in this story.

Huh.

Really clever.

Now I get to go back and read it again for the full enjoyment when I get more time.

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Thank you, Jaime!!! You made my day! I'm glad the fast-read with the bold works. It seemed like a good idea, but you never know in practice.

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Okay I gotta go back to start at square one this is cool.

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Ah, cool! Thanks!

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Really well done! I'm amazed that you can keep the story's "tension" through each chapter. Looking forward to seeing what she learns about her father's second residence.

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