Oh my my my 👀👀👀 the secrets are dropping now. That is, of course, if this man is telling the truth and what his intentions are. Trust no one. Well written!
Really well done! I'm amazed that you can keep the story's "tension" through each chapter. Looking forward to seeing what she learns about her father's second residence.
That... is one of the MOST clever things I've read. Your highlight idea 💡. Never seen that before, at least in fiction.
I've done that in business or blog articles, but it works so well in this story.
Huh.
Really clever.
Now I get to go back and read it again for the full enjoyment when I get more time.
Thank you, Jaime!!! You made my day! I'm glad the fast-read with the bold works. It seemed like a good idea, but you never know in practice.
Oh my my my 👀👀👀 the secrets are dropping now. That is, of course, if this man is telling the truth and what his intentions are. Trust no one. Well written!
Thanks for reading! Glad you're enjoying it!!! 😊
Okay I gotta go back to start at square one this is cool.
Ah, cool! Thanks!
Really well done! I'm amazed that you can keep the story's "tension" through each chapter. Looking forward to seeing what she learns about her father's second residence.