Another great chapter in "The Harvey Girl Mystery." I love how you employ language that seems extracted from that period, such as the word "reproof." And the story continues to twist and turn. Fin's interest in Willa certainly caught me by surprise. But now I wonder: how did he know Willa would be searching her father's home? Did he anticipate her "breaking and entering" and then laid in waiting? Or knowing of her interest in her father, was he (or is he) carrying out his own investigation as a means of drawing closer to her and perhaps understanding "what makes her tick?" I eagerly await the next chapter!
Loved it! Time Witch got its hooks in me earlier, but I’ve come to be just as invested in this serial. Really looking forward to the next part!
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Another great chapter in "The Harvey Girl Mystery." I love how you employ language that seems extracted from that period, such as the word "reproof." And the story continues to twist and turn. Fin's interest in Willa certainly caught me by surprise. But now I wonder: how did he know Willa would be searching her father's home? Did he anticipate her "breaking and entering" and then laid in waiting? Or knowing of her interest in her father, was he (or is he) carrying out his own investigation as a means of drawing closer to her and perhaps understanding "what makes her tick?" I eagerly await the next chapter!