Great chapter. The confrontation with the woman was really well done. We got to see Evangeline's struggle to piece everything together, while learning more about the world.
This had all the fun and tension I would hope to experience in visiting another time. You did a great job of being realistic about what that foray might look like. Loved it!
Another marvelous segment. You really have mastered the linguistic distinctivenesses of each time period. It’s amusing how Evangeline confuses her new acquaintances (living in 1910) with her 21st century colloquialisms. Well done! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Great chapter. The confrontation with the woman was really well done. We got to see Evangeline's struggle to piece everything together, while learning more about the world.
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying the story!
This had all the fun and tension I would hope to experience in visiting another time. You did a great job of being realistic about what that foray might look like. Loved it!
Another marvelous segment. You really have mastered the linguistic distinctivenesses of each time period. It’s amusing how Evangeline confuses her new acquaintances (living in 1910) with her 21st century colloquialisms. Well done! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
So glad you are enjoying the story!!!
😊Thank you, my friend!!! It's always good to hear your thoughts!